Would you kill for
a brand new pair of shoes? No, I don’t mean metaphorically, I mean literally.
Would you kill someone for a new pair of shoes? In the poem, “Please Don’t Take
My Air Jordans” by Reg e. Gaines, this is what the main character does. This
poem is about a boy who feels the need to get new sneakers because his are torn
out. But he doesn't have enough money for them, so decides to get them a
different way. He decides to kill a kid and take his shoes. This poem shows
that kids mostly care about style, and what other people think of them.
In the poem the
boy who wants to get new air Jordans says,
“but I really must get some new gear soon
or my ego will pop like a ten cent balloon
but security’s tight at all the shops
every day there are more and more cops”
From this we can
see that this boy cares more about his “ego” than what would happen to him if
he stole. Stealing is against the law, but he is willing to do it just to keep
his reputation. This shows that this kid mostly cares about style, and will do
anything to stay in style, including stealing.
I think this is a
big deal going around nowadays. Kids feel as though they need to do certain
things just to fit in and to be popular, in this case, have a new pair of
shoes, just to fit in.
Since
security is tight at the shops, the boy decides instead of stealing from a
store, he will steal from a person. He finds shoes that he likes on a guy and follows
him till no one is around, then “POW,” he shoots him then runs away with his
shoes.
“the very next day I bopped into school
with my brand new
air jordans man I was cool
I killed to get
them but hey… I don’t care
cuz now… I needs
a new jacket to wear”
This shows that the
kid mostly cares about style, because he doesn't care that he killed someone,
plus we can tell he is planning to kill someone again for his jacket. Overall the
boy cares more about getting new shoes, then ending someone’s life.
Another example is when the boy shoots his victim:
“while laying
there dyin all he could say was
please…don’t take
my air jordans away…”
This shows that
the boy who got shot for his shoes, cares more about his shoes being stolen
than dying. You would think getting shot would make you worried about yourself,
but instead he is worried about his shoes.
After reading this
poem, I realized that there are more important things in life than wearing the
latest fashion or brand. I think kids should also stop worrying about fitting
in, and be themselves even though they’re not wearing the newest shoes or the
latest jacket.
this is a really good response. I liked the way you supported your ideas well with evidence
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